VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch.13.3.4] [Eva Kiss]

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Works keep progressing between art and writing. I've been focusing more on the latter, and I'm moving into the final scenes of the episode. They will tie up some important branches that will finally define the relationships between several characters, and I'm hoping I can move the plot forward to a new status quo as different plotlines get resolved.
This time I don't have any insights to share, but I want to ask for your collaboration. In one of my previous posts you mentioned you'd like to see the gang play some sort of social game, and "Never have I ever" sounds like just the thing that can work mechanicaly and be fun in this chapter's context. I'm thinking on the best way to tackle it, and what kind of questions could the player and the cast ask, especially depending on the various permutations they can have based on their development.
I'd like to ask for your ideas, to find inspiration or outright use them during this scene. So, if you have any, please write them down on the comments!

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seaoflove сказал(а):

One thing I dislike is that many of Holly's hookups are just a pic or 2. It feels like entire scenes are missing / left to the imagination.

Robert, Clark & Mark: She fucks 3 guys but there aren't 10 pictures between them of the sex scenes.

It would be nice if Eva goes back at some point and has another scene with Holly telling her sex stories to Ivy / Lena. Then illustrates them in a flashback.

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Geralt From Rivia сказал(а):

Eva Kiss:
> Ask to some skilled writer for help - No, how dare are you!
> Ask the crowd of horny perverts on her Patreon - Yeah, it's a great idea, what can possibly go wrong?

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mommysboiii сказал(а):

do you think holly ever tought about big black fat cocks???

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seaoflove сказал(а):

One thing I dislike is that many of Holly's hookups are just a pic or 2. It feels like entire scenes are missing / left to the imagination.

Robert, Clark & Mark: She fucks 3 guys but there aren't 10 pictures between them of the sex scenes.

It would be nice if Eva goes back at some point and has another scene with Holly telling her sex stories to Ivy / Lena. Then illustrates them in a flashback.

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Geralt From Rivia сказал(а):

Eva Kiss:
> Ask to some skilled writer for help - No, how dare are you!
> Ask the crowd of horny perverts on her Patreon - Yeah, it's a great idea, what can possibly go wrong?

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Gicoo сказал(а):

Migh as well just steal it from other VNs like Nothing is Forever.

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mommysboiii сказал(а):

dude I am a great writer

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Blurpee69 сказал(а):

We should run a little experiment.

Step 1: Go find a person that you don't know very well, but know for a fact is in a relationship with someone else.
Step 2: Grab that persons ass, and I mean really play the fucking bongos on those cheeks.
Step 3: Report your findings to the classroom.

My hypothesis: you'll wish the person you did that too had as mild a reaction as Cindy.

So no, the expectation isn't that everything you do should lead to sex, because actions have consequences. And unsurprisingly, or perhaps surprising for some, molesting casual acquaintances tends to be a turn off for like 99.98% of the population. It's perfectly OK, encouraged even, for their to be negative reactions to Ian or Lena's less socially acceptable behaviors.

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chinesewarrior сказал(а):

Bro, I am having trouble to understand your comparison between a porn game and a real life experiment ? Step out of Matrix.

This is a game, and it is a porn game. So you can go and grab a random chick's ass and she can like it , depending on your stats and pre-requirements/conditions you can have sex with her.

I don't know in your neighbourhood if plumbers are looking like johnny sins and things are escalating from fixing sinks to something else, but these things happen in movies not in real life.

I hope you're not suggesting people to go out and "experiment" shooting games in real life in some FPS forums.

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SearingFive сказал(а):

Ever heard of sarcasm?
Step out of the matrix

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mommysboiii сказал(а):

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varpep сказал(а):

Just played the Alison love route for the first time and now I see what all the fuss is about. The scenes are among the hottest in the game and Alison is genuinely great. It also doesn't hurt that she has a rocking hot bod.

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On a side note, I also played the Cindy love route as well. It was nice the see Ian finally call Cindy out on her bullshit and set his boundaries. If the relationship continues I suspect she won't take him for granted anymore.

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varpep сказал(а):

Just played the Alison love route for the first time and now I see what all the fuss is about. The scenes are among the hottest in the game and Alison is genuinely great. It also doesn't hurt that she has a rocking hot bod.

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On a side note, I also played the Cindy love route as well. It was nice the see Ian finally call Cindy out on her bullshit and set his boundaries. If the relationship continues I suspect she won't take him for granted anymore.

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Geralt From Rivia сказал(а):

To cuck or not to cuck - that is the question.

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Gicoo сказал(а):

Never have I ever got drunk playing this game.
Never have I ever bought something in an adult store.
Never have I ever used a dating app.
Never have I ever sent a nude pic to someone.
Never have I ever faked an orgasm.
Never have I ever pretended an emergency to escape a date.
Never have I ever flirted with someone just to get a free drink.
Never have I ever told someone I had a boyfriend just because I wasn't interested in them.
Never have I ever done it more than three times in the same day.
Never have I ever secretly touched someones genitals in a public place.
Never have I ever skinny dipped.
Never have I ever slept with someone on a first date.
Never have I ever cheated on someone.
Never have I ever been submissive in the bedroom.
Never have I ever let someone else control when I can orgasm.
Never have I ever cum on someones face or mouth.
Never have I ever had anal sex.
Never have I ever flashed my breasts in a public place.
Never have I ever fantasized about or had sex with someone of the same gender.
Never have I ever fantasized about sleeping with someone from this group (that I'm not in a relationship with).
Never have I ever dominated someone during sex.
Never have I ever secretly slept with someone I shouldn't have.
Never have I ever had a threesome.
Never have I ever lied today during this game.

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Zara Scarlet сказал(а):

There's no way I'm playing 'never have I ever' with you. I wouldn't stand a chance.

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